You have a really nice style. Your art is excellent which I think is the best starting point to good animation. You've really perfected the art of capturing emotion, especially through slow motion. My one criticism would be that some of the shots (particularly at the start) lasted too long. I know you probably wanted to keep with the music but you need to think about editing in creating excitement. Generally speaking, the more action is occurring, the faster the editing bewtween shots. Even in movies where they use slow motion they will only use a littl bit because are at risk of loosing the attention of their audience if they show something in too much detail for too long. But Like I say it was awesome. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next =D
It's funny, intellectual, has a message what more could you want. I'm not sure everyone got the Australia related jokes but hey, it was made for QandA. I really wish I saw this one on TV =( Ah well, life goes on. Excellent work my greasy friend.
thanks! yeh the 5% is a little obscure, even for some australians
It had a good storyline and was relatively funny but I could tell that the animation was rushed this time, no offence. Also I see that your flash like mine was barely noticed by newgrounds. I only got 2 reviews on JvB and one of them I asked for. lol
You have once again managed to turn a few days work into another utterly entertaining masterpiece so I give you my congradulations. Well done!
Thanks for the review man.
Yeah it sucks when you just get looked over. I didn't even get put in the Christmas or winter collection. I did like 60% of this between 11pm christmas eve until 7am christmas day, so yeah the animation was a bit rushed.
Well, It only took me 6 and a half hours but I finished it. This is a great game both by concept and quality. You clearly put a lot of effort into the minor details and I loved the way that even when buying the same unit, they would have slight differences from each other like the colour of their shoes! I can remember playing this for a number of days when it first came out and the mere fact that I was drawn back today to spend 6 hours completing it is a clear sign of just how good this game is!
Good work 10/10
Well haven't you been busy, It's only been what a week since Outback Attack 1 came out and you've already made a "sequel". The reason I used quotation marks on sequel is because I don't think this technically counts as a new game. You changed the landscape to ochre which I suppose is better than the last one because it's one of the things which the outback is famous for. And I think you made the game easier because I got further this time, but considering I normally completely fail these games it isn't necessarily a good thing to have me suceed. lol
Unfortunately when it comes to the nitty gritty this game is essentially the same as the first one. You should have called it a new version not a new game (or I'm being overly pedantic and need to stop turning the title of peoples flashes into some long rant about sequels).
Anyway I won't mark you down just for the title. If you choose to make an outback attack 3 please:
New graphics (not that these ones are bad)
more than one type of weapon (e.g laser and missile options)
any other ideas you may have to make this game more original
Nice game, congrats.
Overall a good game. It was a good Idea to have people draw themselves and then have it animated. The animation at the end was simple but nice. My main problems for this game came with the drawing tools. You need to have finer pointed tools my cartoon looked very thick lined and scribbly furthermore YOU NEED AN ERASER. Go, now, make one add it to the game and then, in you account upload the new version into this file. Also I suggest that for 'Draw Your Own Cartoon 2' you start off with one big square (labelled head) then allow them to draw it then they click "next and they have a big square (labelled Body) which they can draw... This would allow people to put more effort into it.
So in summary
*better end animation (or more than one to choose from)
Sorry if I sounded too cynical, I really enjoyed this, you earned 10 stars!
thanks good ideas
You have a real talent for barbershop, i hope to hear more from you.
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