Indeed!
You should work on you graphics and animation. I wouldn't suggest using dotted lines in the future. Not the best I've seen today but you've clearly put a lot of effort into this and I did like it. some lip syncing would have been nice and up your framerate but it had a nice storyline.
Good work!
hmm...
Look it's good and stuff. NICE ANIMATION! But you problem is audio. YOU NEED BACKGROUND MUSIC!!! YOUR VOICE IS NOT ENOUGH!!! newgrounds has an audio portal specifically for this purpose. Pick up a freeby there.
I look forward to your next flash.
Well I'm not really sure what to write here but anyway. I have owned flash for a couple of years now and it's replaced whatever crappy computer game I used to play for entertainment. I tend to make fairly random flashes with no storyline... Yeah.
Age 32, Male
student/dishpig
Australia
Joined on 6/4/08
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